Hajime 02

The main character of my Gundam doujinshi. Hajime Ataru. This is a full body shot of him in his casual wear, which is what he'll be wearing for, like, the first half of the story altogether. It won't be until the middle that he starts wearing a uniform. As you'll notice, he's got a lot of hair. So much hair, that in the story, when he fails to tie it up into that ponytail, he is sometimes mistaken for a girl. At the left is a badly drawn shot of him climbing into the cockpit of the Gundam Velocity. At the bottom right is a shot of him... shooting with a badly drawn 9mm pistol. If that one looks weird, it might help to know that he's looking out of the corner of his eye, shooting to the immediate right of him, without turning or pivoting his body. Above that is a shot of him in the cockpit of the Gundam Velocity. Obviously he seems enraged and frustrated. At the very top is a very small, very badly drawn shot of him shirtless. The reason he looks so embarrassed, is because that is taken from a point in the story where he is snuck up on while he is undressing. He's kinda modest and self concious.

Feedback? Anyone?