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Akane Detailed

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This is the larger, better picture of Akane. I'd REALLY love some feedback on this one. I tried to give her the best hips and ass I possibly could. I wanted them large and sexy. Not large and fat. How do you think I did?

I've described Akane's personality in the previous Akane picture. Though I didn't describe how often she complains about her mobile suit, and how much she dislikes it. She is the pilot of the Melee Gundam, and she thinks it sucks because you have to get so close to kill things. She only says that because she is inexperienced in mobile suit combat. She has a sad past that won't really be revealed until I post the doujinshi itself.
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Well since you wanted feedback.

Here's what I think. Her waist needs to flow in more from her breasts/upperbody. Then, you need to make it flow back OUT into the hips, or else it'll look like her hips are fake and like...put on OVER her waist. ) ( <---- think that ^^

I think you got the poses down right, the only problem i can see are in the full body profile. Other than what I just pointed out, this is a very nice picture ^^